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Opposite's Attract ᑕOᗰᑭᒪᗴTᗴᗪ✓
"𝙾𝚙𝚙𝚘𝚜𝚒𝚝𝚎'𝚜 𝙰𝚝𝚝𝚛𝚊𝚌𝚝" 𝚒𝚜 𝚊𝚋𝚘𝚞𝚝 𝚊 𝚜𝚠𝚎𝚎𝚝 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚔𝚒𝚗𝚍 𝚠𝚘𝚖𝚊𝚗 𝚗𝚊𝚖𝚎𝚍 𝙼𝚊𝚛𝚐𝚘𝚝 𝙳𝚞𝚙𝚘𝚒𝚜. 𝚠𝚑𝚘 𝚒𝚜 𝚋𝚎𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚊𝚋𝚞𝚜𝚎𝚍 𝚋𝚢 𝚑𝚎𝚛 𝚏𝚒𝚊𝚗𝚌𝚎 𝚠𝚑𝚎𝚗 𝚜𝚑𝚎 𝚏𝚒𝚗𝚊𝚕𝚕𝚢 𝚐𝚊𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚛'𝚜 𝚎𝚗𝚘𝚞𝚐𝚑 𝚌𝚘𝚞𝚛𝚊𝚐𝚎 𝚝𝚘 𝚕𝚎𝚊𝚟𝚎 𝚑𝚒𝚖 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚐𝚘 𝚝𝚘 𝙿𝚊𝚛𝚒𝚜 𝚠𝚑𝚎𝚛𝚎 𝚜𝚑𝚎 𝚖𝚎𝚎𝚝𝚜 𝚊 𝚛𝚞𝚍𝚎, 𝚍𝚎𝚊𝚍𝚕𝚢, 𝚌𝚘𝚕𝚍 𝚟𝚊𝚖𝚙𝚒𝚛𝚎 𝚗𝚊𝚖𝚎𝚍 𝙰𝚛𝚝𝚑𝚞𝚛 𝙵𝚘𝚞𝚛𝚗𝚒𝚎𝚛 𝚠𝚑𝚘'𝚜 𝚖𝚊𝚜𝚚𝚞𝚎𝚛𝚊𝚍𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚊𝚜 𝚊 𝚋𝚞𝚜𝚒𝚗𝚎𝚜𝚜 𝚖𝚊𝚗 𝚑𝚎𝚛 𝚌𝚘𝚖𝚙𝚕𝚎𝚝𝚎 𝚘𝚙𝚙𝚘𝚜𝚒𝚝𝚎 𝚠𝚑𝚊𝚝 𝚑𝚊𝚙𝚙𝚎𝚗𝚜 𝚠𝚑𝚎𝚗 𝚑𝚎 𝚌𝚘𝚖𝚎𝚜 𝚊𝚌𝚛𝚘𝚜𝚜 𝚑𝚎𝚛? 𝚠𝚑𝚊𝚝 𝚠𝚒𝚕𝚕 𝚑𝚊𝚙𝚙𝚎𝚗? ᑕOᗰᑭᒪᗴTᗴᗪ✓ TᕼIՏ IՏ ᗷOOK Oᑎᗴ✓Lengkap
The Perfect Affair
Baby I'm so sorry I can't explain why I did this. Shut up. I gave you everything. There was no need for this and yet you treated me like this. You know what you will pay for this and him too. Get the hell out my house right now!!!!! ------------------------------ ⚠️ Warning ⚠️ -Mature Content -Strong LanguageLengkap
𝐓𝐡𝐞 𝐒𝐭𝐚𝐫𝐭 𝐓𝐨 𝐒𝐨𝐦𝐞𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐒𝐩𝐞𝐜𝐢𝐚𝐥 (ᐯᗩᗰᑭIᖇᗴ ՏTOᖇY)
𝖨𝗍'𝗌 𝖺𝖻𝗈𝗎𝗍 𝖺 𝗀𝗂𝗋𝗅 𝗇𝖺𝗆𝖾𝖽 𝖬𝗈𝗋𝗂𝖾𝗍𝗍𝖾 𝗐𝗁𝗈 𝖺𝗅𝗌𝗈 𝗁𝖺𝗉𝗉𝖾𝗇𝗌 𝗍𝗈 𝖻𝖾 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝗌𝖾𝗇𝖺𝗍𝗈𝗋'𝗌 𝖽𝖺𝗎𝗀𝗁𝗍𝖾𝗋 𝗌𝗁𝖾 𝗀𝗈𝖾𝗌 𝗈𝗎𝗍 𝗍𝗈 𝖺 𝖼𝗅𝗎𝖻 𝗐𝗂𝗍𝗁 𝗁𝖾𝗋 𝖻𝖾𝗌𝗍 𝖿𝗋 𝗂𝖾𝗇𝖽 𝖢𝖺𝗆𝗂𝗅𝗅𝖾 𝗍𝗈 𝖼𝖾𝗅𝖾𝖻𝗋𝖺𝗍𝖾 𝗁𝖾𝗋 20𝗍𝗁 𝖻𝗂𝗋𝗍𝗁𝖽𝖺𝗒 𝗌𝗁𝖾 𝖽𝗈𝖾𝗌𝗇𝗍 𝗋𝖾𝖺𝗅𝗂𝗓𝖾 𝗂𝗍 𝗍𝗂𝗅 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝗇𝖾𝗑𝗍 𝖽𝖺𝗒 𝖻𝗎𝗍 𝗌𝗁𝖾 𝗅𝗈𝗌𝖾𝗌 𝗁𝖾𝗋 𝗉𝗁𝗈𝗇𝖾 𝗌𝗈 𝖢𝖺𝗆𝗂𝗅𝗅𝖾 𝗁𝖺𝗌 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝖻𝗋𝗂𝗀𝗁𝗍 𝗂𝖽𝖾𝖺 𝗍𝗈 𝖼𝖺𝗅𝗅 𝗂𝗍 𝖺𝗇𝖽 𝗌𝖾𝖾 𝗐𝗁𝖺𝗍 𝗁𝖺𝗉𝗉𝖾𝗇𝗌 𝗌𝗈 𝗌𝗁𝖾 𝖽𝗈𝖾𝗌 𝖺𝗇𝖽 𝗌𝗁𝖾 𝗌𝖾𝗍𝗌 𝗎𝗉 𝖺 𝗆𝖾𝖾𝗍𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝗍𝗈 𝗋𝖾𝗍𝗋𝗂𝖾𝗏𝖾 𝗁𝖾𝗋 𝗉𝗁𝗈𝗇𝖾 𝗐𝗁𝗈 𝗐𝗂𝗅𝗅 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝗉𝖾𝗋𝗌𝗈𝗇 𝖻𝖾?Lengkap
A Sanctuary Abroad... Dark Yandere |Completed|
Simple words "You don't have to lift a finger" got you on board ,A little getaway was the plan, a simple vacation with your best friend in an unknown town. Enjoying the itinerary that was presented on a silver plate made your mind at ease ... your biggest mistake I guess was not making your own research before taking a step on that plane. ⚠️ it's a Yandere X reader type of story with a lot of stuff aka, dark themes, lemons , gore, mental issues, suicidal thoughts and much more, so if you are affected by these types of topics please don't read !! You have been warned!!⚠️Lengkap
Taunt
"Can we stop feeling guilty, Amelia? Guilty for all the things that weren't our fault." "We can Leo. Maybe someday." "That day isn't far off Amelia. I'll make sure of it." ___________________________________ There is a lot to think about when you find out your best friend has been raped and murdered. There is even more to think about when you're the last person she saw the night she died. But that's not what caused me to black out in the middle of a rocking party scene, surrounded by all the people I had known all my life. It was when I saw who had killed her. Hilarious, charming, the guy with the perfect quiff, and star quarter-back of the football team. He was loved by everyone. He was the guy you couldn't stay away from. Levi Harrison. My brother. ____________________________ #1 for General Fiction in The Grace Awards 2019 #1 College Romance 11/19 #3 Bullyingawareness 04/20 #2 Assault 06/20 • Started: August 2018 Ended: - January 2020 (Unedited) • WARNING: this book contains a mature theme, not suitable for all audiences. There are recurring themes of assault, mild depression, and violence. On the other hand: it'll put a big fat smile on your face! •Any media used belongs to it's rightful owners. No images or videos used belong to me.•Lengkap
The Maddest Obsession
"He'd burn the whole world down till he could dig me out of the ashes." I was ready to start a new life. After graduating at the top of my class, I finally had everything. My apartment. My gallery. A perfect boyfriend. Basically, I was living my dream life and I was loving every second of it. But then in came him. And then chaos occurred. All great love stories were supposed to have a happy ending. Mine did too, until he came along. This is the tale of how he found me, how he stole me, and how he lost me. I was a damsel, one who already had her white knight. But every fairy tale had a villain, someone waiting in the wings to rip it all down. A scoundrel who would set the world on fire if that meant he got what he wants. It was me. He wanted me. You know, they say it was bad when you fall for the wrong guy, but the thing was, it was worse when the wrong guy falls for you. WARNING: Contains sensitive topics like cheating. Also contains mature/sexual content and situations that some people might find offensive so it is intended for mature audience only. [18+ content]Lengkap
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Perfect Storm
___________________________ "You were mine the second you put your signature on that contract." He looked at me with pure lust and dominance in his eyes. "F*ck you." He smirks and moves closer to me, coming to my side of the booth and caging me against the window. "I'll give you what you want if you do." "And what do I want?" I question, holding eye contact. "My head between your legs." ❀❀❀ "Dating or not... you're still mine." Astoria always thought that the world was set up a certain way. That way being two levels of living. There were the rich people, and then there were the people who could barely afford a pack of ramen noodles. Obviously she was the ladder. She always hated the rich people she would see around the city. They had more money than they needed and didn't think to help the lower people. She was always alone. Her mother died when giving birth to her and her father gave her to her grandmother who died of old age before she could turn 3. She was orphaned and in foster homes her whole life, being alone was all she knew. On top of that her job as an exotic dancer barley covered her bills and she was late 3 months in payment. What was left for her? She had nothing. Until one of the club Clients offers her a deal that may change her life... Read Perfect Storm to find out how this predicament takes place... ❀❀❀ Ratings: #1 Contract - 8|13|2023Lengkap
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𝐓𝐡𝐞 𝐓𝐞𝐦𝐩𝐭𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧𝐬
"I'm a devil Ira think before you say anything", he replied staring into her soul "I don't care if I fall in love with a devil, as long as that devil will love me the way he loves hell", she said maintaining the eye contact "Your angel eyes see the good in a devil 𝘮𝘪 𝘢𝘮𝘰𝘳", he strolled towards her with long steps "And the sweet little angel couldn't keep her eyes off the devil", she titled her head sideways when he grabbed her neck harshly yet carefully not to hurt her but "You are fucking impetuous and daring, a little too bold and way too fucking fearless. You are my sickening Temptation, in my veins like a pretty poison", he didn't even waited for her to reply shutting her off by smashing his lips on hers devouring her like a secret or a sin. He had this look in his eyes how he owns her how she belongs to him. But for her he can he can kill and get killed would burn down the world for her but not let a single flame touch her. She hold the power to make the Lord of Darkness kneel before her. 𝐇𝐞 𝐰𝐚𝐬 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐃𝐚𝐫𝐤 𝐅𝐚𝐢𝐫𝐲𝐭𝐚𝐥𝐞 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐬𝐡𝐞 𝐰𝐚𝐬 𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐓𝐰𝐢𝐬𝐭𝐞𝐝 𝐅𝐚𝐧𝐭𝐚𝐬𝐲--- 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐭𝐨𝐠𝐞𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐲 𝐦𝐚𝐝𝐞 𝐦𝐚𝐠𝐢𝐜 𝐛𝐥𝐞𝐧𝐝𝐞𝐝 𝐰𝐢𝐭𝐡 𝐝𝐞𝐯𝐚𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧. || Mature and Triggering content || Read at your own discretion.Lengkap
"𝙾𝚙𝚙𝚘𝚜𝚒𝚝𝚎'𝚜 𝙰𝚝𝚝𝚛𝚊𝚌𝚝" 𝚒𝚜 𝚊𝚋𝚘𝚞𝚝 𝚊 𝚜𝚠𝚎𝚎𝚝 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚔𝚒𝚗𝚍 𝚠𝚘𝚖𝚊𝚗 𝚗𝚊𝚖𝚎𝚍 𝙼𝚊𝚛𝚐𝚘𝚝 𝙳𝚞𝚙𝚘𝚒𝚜. 𝚠𝚑𝚘 𝚒𝚜 𝚋𝚎𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚊𝚋𝚞𝚜𝚎𝚍 𝚋𝚢 𝚑𝚎𝚛 𝚏𝚒𝚊𝚗𝚌𝚎 𝚠𝚑𝚎𝚗 𝚜𝚑𝚎 𝚏𝚒𝚗𝚊𝚕𝚕𝚢 𝚐𝚊𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚛'𝚜 𝚎𝚗𝚘𝚞𝚐𝚑 𝚌𝚘𝚞𝚛𝚊𝚐𝚎 𝚝𝚘 𝚕𝚎𝚊𝚟𝚎 𝚑𝚒𝚖 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚐𝚘 𝚝𝚘 𝙿𝚊𝚛𝚒𝚜 𝚠𝚑𝚎𝚛𝚎 𝚜𝚑𝚎 𝚖𝚎𝚎𝚝𝚜 𝚊 𝚛𝚞𝚍𝚎, 𝚍𝚎𝚊𝚍𝚕𝚢, 𝚌𝚘𝚕𝚍 𝚟𝚊𝚖𝚙𝚒𝚛𝚎 𝚗𝚊𝚖𝚎𝚍 𝙰𝚛𝚝𝚑𝚞𝚛 𝙵𝚘𝚞𝚛𝚗𝚒𝚎𝚛 𝚠𝚑𝚘'𝚜 𝚖𝚊𝚜𝚚𝚞𝚎𝚛𝚊𝚍𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚊𝚜 𝚊 𝚋𝚞𝚜𝚒𝚗𝚎𝚜𝚜 𝚖𝚊𝚗 𝚑𝚎𝚛 𝚌𝚘𝚖𝚙𝚕𝚎𝚝𝚎 𝚘𝚙𝚙𝚘𝚜𝚒𝚝𝚎 𝚠𝚑𝚊𝚝 𝚑𝚊𝚙𝚙𝚎𝚗𝚜 𝚠𝚑𝚎𝚗 𝚑𝚎 𝚌𝚘𝚖𝚎𝚜 𝚊𝚌𝚛𝚘𝚜𝚜 𝚑𝚎𝚛? 𝚠𝚑𝚊𝚝 𝚠𝚒𝚕𝚕 𝚑𝚊𝚙𝚙𝚎𝚗? ᑕOᗰᑭᒪᗴTᗴᗪ✓ TᕼIՏ IՏ ᗷOOK Oᑎᗴ✓
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