Who's There(on hold!)

ONCE UPON A TIME .......

a girl called Angela lived in a massive house where she had everything she ever wanted. you could say she was the luckiest girl in the world, she also had a little brother called Nathan, who was only 1 and a half years old.

but how does little miss perfect's life crumble apart when she meets a mysterious stranger and when she discovers hidden secrets and feelings!!!(sorry im really bad at blurbs and stuff.)
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now I don't know how this story is gonna turn out but I'm trying to make it a bit of a fairy tale with some horror in it ...hope it gives u a bit of a fright !!