[Needs name] 1st draft

[Needs name] 1st draft

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Soulreader Asuka is tasked with getting the name and destiny of the new prince from the spirit, Eirwen. However, when the child is given a dark future, he lies to protect himself. When the prophecy comes to fruition, Asuka must has to sacrifice everything and pick between his kingdom and the fallen (Lol, hi. I'm kinda just making this up as I go. Sorry of I dont update)
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The Shadow Knight

For as long as time itself can remember, there are the classic stories. These stories always depict the valiant prince coming to save the beautiful damsel in distress. Although the real question is, who saves the prince? Who comes to his aid when he's caught in a life threatening situation? That's where we come in. My name is Elizabeth Berkley, and I am a Guardian. My problem? The gods have chosen me to Guard the most arrogant and high maintenance prince of them all! If that wasn't enough, there's a new threat to our home which thrusts me and this dumb Prince on a quest that risks both of our lives. Gods help me! {Completed}

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