Illusions
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Last published Tue, Feb 16, 2021
I wrote this to get feedback on how I wrote so I can improve if you have any feedback or ideas on what to write please do tell.
This story is set in a world where people have superpowers and some go to schools to learn how to control their powers better and more effectively.
Our main character is a person who goes by Illusions they're power is obviously illusions but they also have a control over dreams we will be going through his life in third perspective and first person. I will also try to write different perspectives.
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