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Illusions

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Reads 56
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Parts 2
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illusion superhero

I wrote this to get feedback on how I wrote so I can improve if you have any feedback or ideas on what to write please do tell.

  
  This story is set in a world where people have superpowers and some go to schools to learn how to control their powers better and more effectively.


   Our main character is a person who goes by Illusions they're power is obviously illusions but they also have a control over dreams we will be going through his life in third perspective and first person. I will also try to write different perspectives.All Rights Reserved

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