life of tuin (remastered)

This is a book about a dragons and the mysteries around their ways, I have researched different theories and stories of dragons so to give you a rough idea of what the dragons are really like (if they ever existed but thats a whole different theory for another time ;-)) I have previously done this book but now I have more experiance with writing and much better English (not always the best but hold tight) so now I have decided to write this novel again, I would also love to hear your thoughts as the readers about any grammar mistakes or anything you think could be better about the chapters because I admit I am a learner writer so thank you all xx