An irreplaceable love (Rewrite)
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So this is a rewrite of my most popular story, "an irreplaceable love". I wanted to do a rewrite because I just don't really like the original al that much and I feel like there is so much I could've done better in terms of keeping the story line on the straight and true and making sure everything in general stays on track. So, This story is actually going to change quite a bit, while still keeping the original as a baseline for it.
Some of the things that will be changing is Alex and Eliza's relationship. I just view Eliza as a genuinely sweet person and it's hard to write her as such a cruel person. Also, I know some people like her but I will not be including Aspen, sorry. Also, John's deadname will be changing (not that is really matters cause its not his real name anyway) to Jacquelyn. Also, this story will hopefully be much better because I feel like I am a much better writer then when I wrote the original story and I feel like I know better what I am writing about now then I did before.
Now for the actual story description.
Jacquelyn Laurens and Alexander Hamilton are best friends. They have been since kindergarden. However, when they are at the age of 10, Alexander and his mother have to move back to where he was born, a small Island in the Caribbean called Nevis. During their goodbyes, Jack just wants to tell Alex one thing. One thing that's extremely important. But she is scared that her best friend will turn his back on her. The important thing is that Jacqulyn is not his name and that he is actually a boy named John Laurens.
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