ASTAKSA - Preamble
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Last published Sat, Jul 16, 2022
An accidental trip to a parallel world required wits from Faust Aldrich, a British high-school teenager, to stop an interdimensional invasion to other worlds - threatening Earth itself. When advanced technology clashed with traditional elemental magic, there would be no one to trust other than those who had enchanting eyes or undying loyalty.
And to Faust, a smile is a commodity he could not reap.
Genre: Young-adult fantasy, sci-fi, action, adventure, friendship.
[WORK-IN-PROGRESS] [Chapter 10/13]
[Preamble is the first series of the ASTAKSA saga. It has only just begun]
[Main inspiration: BUMI, The Dragon Prince, Avatar The Last Airbender, Genshin Impact, etc.]
Thank you for checking out my first novel! The aim for this novel is to experiment my English skills as a non-native speaker. Any feedback is totally welcome!
Much thanks to folks over at Writer's Hub on Discord (sorry if I missed one of you):
twicedouble, Aleksander, R, H, Ahi, Ghast, Aspire, Sho, Grace, REAPER. jen, wildflowerz, Sol, Rand0m
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