Bound for Error
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MatureOngoing2h 38m
Last published Mon, Aug 23, 2021
Alternate Allegiant/We can be mended ending.
I loath the way they happened. Two books & 2/3 building up to their relationship to just kill her off and give the life they wanted to Christina. ABSOLUTELY NOT.
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