Doctor's Orders

Doctor's Orders

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This is a section of a journal that is being kept by a sixteen-year-old named Brendon Talin. He’s been doing fine for the past three years, getting decent grades and staying out of trouble (for the most part, anyways; his teachers hate him). But his dad’s come back, and now everything’s a mess. excerpt from my nanowrimo!
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Sun is a common young man, with a disabled father, a lovely mother, and three siblings he loves above all. He is hard-working and tries his best to help his family repay the debts his father accumulates. But this is never enough, and one day the debt collectors come to sack his mother's restaurant, hurting his mother and sending his father into a coma. Fortunately he meets Talay, a street hero rescuing victims of gangs and who saved his sister from such, and Talay quickly becomes his support through all the blows life sends at him. Until that one day, when the restaurant catches fire, with his little brother inside... ******* This was written as a #NaNoWriMo July camp story, decided on a whimp on the 1st of July, because a friend joined. I set the goal to 25,000 words, and told myself I'd write it during my 2 weeks holidays. Turned out 25,000 words weren't enough for the story I wanted to write, so I added 25,000 more: and this is Book 2. I want to write more chapters, but I had decided to keep to this word count, so, so be it. Also, this Wattpad version won't be exactly 25,000 words, because I'm unsure about Wattpad policy, so I auto-censured and cut out the NC scenes (they're part of Sun and Sea story, it hurts a lot... But I don't want their whole story to disappear either) I hope you'll like it! There will be a French version of it, too 😘🇲🇫

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