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Without you: Lauren's journey

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Reads 41
Votes 8
Parts 3
Time 7m

A girl named, Lauren, who still has the rest of her family but can't get over her mother's death. This is her journey. The story starts at a flashback of the day her mother died

I'm looking for any constructive criticism! This is my first attempt at writing something besides a short story!

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Genesis

Casey was a small child when it all Started. Only about 10 years of age when her father left. 14 when her mother was killed in a server accident. Going to court at the age of 16 to discuss her mothers death a few years later, Her brother thinking it was a murder rather then an accident. At age 18 when they finally buried her mothers ashes, she reveals I devastating secret that leads her to branch off from her family. Running away to the army about a year later, dodging trouble along the road to her independence and freedom from the past. This story is about loss and forgiveness of a young girl who's life was cut short by bad decisions that lead to her future forever being unnatural. WARNING- There may be some strong language and descriptive details. I will try and post warnings before each part like that. Enjoy!