Without you: Lauren's journey

Without you: Lauren's journey

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A girl named, Lauren, who still has the rest of her family but can't get over her mother's death. This is her journey. The story starts at a flashback of the day her mother died I'm looking for any constructive criticism! This is my first attempt at writing something besides a short story! This is just a short chapter book!
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Lauren's parents were murdered when she was just fifteen years old. At school she is the badass who stays by herself, till one day of her senior year when a new student walks through the doors of her high school, turning her whole world upside down. Lauren thought she's already lived the worst part of her life...oh is the young werewolf wrong. ******* I suck at summaries but give it a try (: This was my first ever book. I never thought I could put together a whole Story. Back in 2016 my girlfriend used to write a book on her own, she was the reason I ever started writing anything so I'd like to thank her for that and even go as far as dedicating this book to her, even though we aren't a part of each other's life anymore. I started writing this book back in 2016 and since then I improved a lot. There was a time in 2017 - 2018 when I gave up on this book but in 2019 I finally decided to pick it back up and finish it off. Epilogue updated on June 29th, 2019. I know it's not the best book of all time but I'm proud of finishing it, even though the story and writing style doesn't match me as a person anymore.

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