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Give me constructive criticism and help

YouGotToBeKiTtEnMeh

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YouGotToBeKiTtEnMeh

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❝ 𝐋𝐞𝐭'𝐬 𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐤 𝐬𝐨 𝐰𝐞 𝐜𝐚𝐧 𝐬𝐞𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐥𝐝 𝐭𝐨𝐠𝐞𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐫 ❞ 









Yes, read the tile. I am going to need it while writing fanfics or making them acceptable. 

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ᴼⁿᵉ ˢʰᵒᵗˢ || 𝓭𝓮𝓴𝓾𝓫𝓪𝓴𝓾 by the_iconicauthor

IT'S BEEN A YEAR OR TWO SINCE I STARTED THIS‼️ ‼️ITS CRINGE I KNOW‼️ no remakes :3 THANKS SM FOR 100K+ READS???? ❤️❤️❤️ ★彡[ᴅᴋʙᴋ ᴏɴᴇ ꜱʜᴏᴛꜱ!!]彡★ ⍟⍨𝓕𝓮𝓮𝓵 𝓯𝓻𝓮𝓮 𝓽𝓸 𝓬𝓸𝓶𝓶𝓮𝓷𝓽!⍨⍟ 🤍🕯️𝓡𝓮𝓺𝓾𝓮𝓼𝓽𝓼 𝓪𝓻𝓮 𝓸𝓹𝓮𝓷!! <3 🕊️🐚 𝐒𝐨𝐦𝐞 𝐜𝐡𝐚𝐩𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐬 𝐦𝐚𝐲 𝐛𝐞 𝐜𝐫𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐞- ~~~ 🥀🩰🎸💓 ʜɪɢʜᴇꜱᴛ ʀᴀɴᴋꜱ: #1 ʟᴜᴠ 5/2/23 #1 ʜᴇʀᴏ ʙᴀᴋᴜɢᴏᴜ 1/2/23 #1 ᴍᴜʟᴛɪᴘʟᴇ ꜱᴛᴏʀɪᴇꜱ 26/1/23 #10 ᴛᴏᴘɪᴢᴜᴋᴜ 9/2/23 #3 ᴀɢɴꜱᴛ 10/2/23 #1 ʀɪᴄʜɪᴢᴜᴋᴜ 18/3/23 🐚🕯️🕊️

| | 𝙃𝙀𝘼𝙑𝙀𝙉𝙇𝙔. | | 𝙏𝘽𝙃𝙆; 𝗛𝗔𝗡𝗔𝗞𝗢 by -wapulz

"𝕀'𝕝𝕝 𝕓𝕖 𝕪𝕠𝕦𝕣 𝕓𝕠𝕠!~" [Requests are closed] Credits to @tomorrow-by-tsundere for making my theme <33 note: this book is now discontinued and marked as completed. - - - - Requests are happily accepted! :)) - My grammar may vary on some oneshots so I apologize in advance for that - May not update often due to procrastination, lack of ideas, etc - I do not own the book cover art (the pic of Hanako) nor the characters mentioned! Credits to the creator of "Toilet Bound Hanako-Kun!", AidaIro. - Will contain cussing! - Has some manga spoilers! Don't fret tho, chapters will be specified if there is! - Gender Neutral!! - - - Disclaimer: I DO NOT OWN "TOILET BOUND HANAKO-KUN!" NOR THE CHARACTERS MENTIONED Some random characters will be mentioned tho- - - - Date created: 6/8/2020 [Including drafts] Status: [ᴄᴏᴍᴘʟᴇᴛᴇ]

𝐅𝐨𝐫𝐠𝐨𝐭𝐭𝐞𝐧 | 𝘠. 𝘈𝘮𝘢𝘯𝘦 by xXIceWitch

"𝐇𝐚𝐧𝐚𝐤𝐨, 𝐇𝐚𝐧𝐤𝐨, 𝐇𝐚𝐧𝐚𝐤𝐨, 𝐚𝐫𝐞 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐢𝐧 𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐫𝐞?" Yandere! Yugi Amane/Hanako-Kun X Fem! Reader Started: Wednesday, Mar. 17 2021 Ended: Tuesday, Jun. 8 2021 ----------------- (#1 in toiletboundhanako 13/4/2023) (#1 in Yugixreader 5/31/2021) (#1 in Yugiamanexreader 6/16/2021) (#1 in amanexreader 6/16/2021) (#1 in jibakushounenhanako-kun 6/22/2021)

𝐅𝐈𝐑𝐒𝐓 𝐋𝐎𝐕𝐄 ! . ☆𝗃𝗌𝗁𝗄 [✔︎] by -YUENI

first love ; y. twins x f. reader! ━━ ❝ you were my first love , if only things stayed that way ! ❞ &&. oneshots including the yugi twins ! book one !! [ INCLUDES : fluff , angst , lime (?) ] [ MY VERY FIRST FANFIC . - since this was my very first fanfic , expect a lot of horrible grammar , whack logic , horrible stories , & more . my newer books which are on my profile are FAR more better than this . but if you still like to read , go ahead ! just be prepared to cringe IMMENSELY . ] + COMPLETED ! fluff , angst , lime (?) . [ + foul language & triggering topics .]

$Character x male reader book 5 {On Hold} by _DabiSimp_$

‼️ON HOLD‼️ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ok, hii this story is basically one-shots of a lot of characters. You my beautiful reader are my oc!! You just get to name that oc! There for I will give you what the oc looks like for example height hair color eye color and a picture to show you exactly how you look, and the body figure just yours. You can make requests from the shows in chapter 1 which is A/N ok have fun!ꨄ︎ (REQUESTS ARE CLOSED TILL FURTHER NOTICE) {but if there is a show that you want me to do and it's not there tell me the character AND the name of the show!!} ⚠️This story will contain 18+ things⚠️ Fluff(. ❛ ᴗ ❛.) Lime(｡•̀ᴗ-)✧ Lemon( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Action(ง'̀-'́)ง Fantasyᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ I don't want to do sad stuff This is not character x SMR but it will be most... Started: 1.2.22 Ended: ? (Day.month.year) _________________________________ Disclaimer! I do not own any of the characters in this story nor the pictures. I only own the story line and the oc's!! _________________________________

Bakudeku oneshots (discontinued) by bububuleetaeyong

bakudeku oneshots slow updates (at least until school ends) i wont do any smut requests closed (i rly dont think anyone will read this lol i'm mostly doing it for self indulgence) cross-posted on ao3

When I Rule The World (Tbhk x Mokke reader) by Capnolie

I was a normal Mokke who one day got captured by Teru to be his little sister's pet. She tossed me around like a stuffed toy, the days dragged on as I was stuck in hell as the devil herself Tiara taunted me. Everyone turned a blind eye to my struggle after all I was just a Mokke. However, I escaped and now everyone who wronged me SHALL KNOW PAIN! I'll seek them out one by one and take over the world. Everyone will bow down to us Mokke and we'll be respected. Or at least that's what I thought as my little legs hurried as fast as they could to get away from the Minamoto house. (Gender switching (y/n) I promise it's gonna make sense XD) -(Weekly updates every Friday)- (Book one finished) (Book two now ongoing) (I do not own any of Toilet bound Hanako-Kun. I only own the plot of this fanfic, (y\n)s character, my ocs and all the art in this book unless stated otherwise) Working on cross posting this on royal road :D

♡︎𝐓𝗼𝐢𝐥𝐞𝐭 𝐁𝗼𝐮𝐧𝐝 𝐎𝐧𝐞𝐬𝐡𝗼𝐭𝐬♡︎ READ MOST RECENT CHAPTER PLS!! :) by lovequeefs

I write really fucking long stories like usually 1500+ words. i'll do some other stuff to lmao. Uhh yeah this book is just a bit cringe so beware. Like i said my stories are rlly long and they're fem unless there's a request for male. I'm not rlly good with male but i can always try but it's hard bcs i'm a girl. Also I do X READER STORIES I DONT OWN THIS SHOW THE FUCK also how did this get #1 in yugitwins on 5.10.20 the fuck- #7 in amaneyugi on 10.12.20 what the fuck 😭 OH MY GOD I DONT CLAIM THIS BOOK WHATEVER THE FUCK THIS IS HELP I HAVENT EDIT THIS VOOK IN A YEAR THE LADT TIME IT WAS UDATED WAS SEPTEMBER 12TH 2020 PLSSSS HAVE MERCY 💀💀💀 PLEASE TAKE NOTHING IN HERE SWRIOUSLY!!! I WAS RLLY RLLY RLLY DUMB WHEN I WROTE THIS :')

𝐆𝐎𝐎𝐃 𝐍𝐈𝐆𝐇𝐓 ! . ☆𝗃𝗌𝗁𝗄 [✔︎] by -YUENI

good night ; y. amane x f. reader! ━━ ❝ fabricated love my dear ! ❞ &&. just your average , cliche , love story between two teenagers . yet as day's continue to past , one realizes . this isn't the cliche love story she hoped for at all . + COMPLETED ! fluff , angst , romance . [ + foul language & triggering topics .]

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