Give me constructive criticism and help

❝ 𝐋𝐞𝐭'𝐬 𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐤 𝐬𝐨 𝐰𝐞 𝐜𝐚𝐧 𝐬𝐞𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐥𝐝 𝐭𝐨𝐠𝐞𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐫 ❞

Yes, read the tile. I am going to need it while writing fanfics or making them acceptable.

I'm praying I get help because I'm not kitten-ing I'm bad