It Watches (Short story)
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Amber's mom always told her to stay away from the lake. She said that only bad things happen there. But was Amber's mom right, or was it just an exaggeration?
Disclaimer: this is a short story. It will not be continued.
Started: March 3rd, 2021
Ended: July 10th, 2021
I do not own the picture on the cover. It's a random picture that I found on google. All credits go to the original owner.
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