The Commanding Illusion
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  • Reads 5,045
  • Votes 1,847
  • Parts 33
  • Time 4h 6m
Ongoing, First published Mar 02, 2021
She could never fit in, her dark black hair and deep blue eyes made her stand out from the rest. The weird looks and surprised reactions from others made her knew she did not look like the rest. 

The day this teenager was born, April 4, 2000 she could immediately feel the odds of the human world. From the sleepless nights to the dreams and visions, the sensations and the urge to run away from the Hazel family. Zalona had the guts and courage to go beyond her calling. Little did she know she was right all along. Zalona is the golden pea, the chosen one, a young girl that just cannot escape her destiny.
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