Once They Lived In Peace - FIRST DRAFT

Once They Lived In Peace - FIRST DRAFT

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Once they lived in peace... But will they again? _______ When a prank on the Baltian Cathedral Ball goes horribly wrong, Love and Malice meet and agree to swap places, but everyone's holding back secrets, and that's not even half of it. Lord Agronos is back, and no one is safe... In a quest to find where they belong, what will Love and Malice have to lose to get there? Are they prepared to lose their identity for a place to call home? _______ Sorry if chapters XVII - XIX are confusing. A lot of secrets are starting to appear in the plot, and it might get a bit puzzling for you as the reader. Apologies in advance! ________ This book contains: - No swearing or rude words! - Little or no gore or gory content. - Most content suitable for under 13 year olds. - Small amounts of violence and threat (Chapter XXIII) - Use of weaponry This book should be suitable for younger children but please let us know if you disagree with this statement and why. UPDATE: Yes I am aware that at least half this book is really bad. I wrote it when I was quite young and very bad at writing. This is only my first draft of the book, and I am currently rewriting it to be at least 3x better. Please bear this in mind when reading and DON'T JUDGE ME, because I am a better writer now, and I am aware that this is a really bad book right now. Bear with, and maybe one day you will see here that there is a proper book. Also I welcome any tips for improvement :D
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