Once They Lived In Peace - FIRST DRAFT

Once They Lived In Peace - FIRST DRAFT

  • WpView
    LECTURAS 369
  • WpVote
    Votos 13
  • WpPart
    Partes 37
WpMetadataReadConcluida mié, jul 27, 20221h 50m
Once they lived in peace... But will they again? _______ When a prank on the Baltian Cathedral Ball goes horribly wrong, Love and Malice meet and agree to swap places, but everyone's holding back secrets, and that's not even half of it. Lord Agronos is back, and no one is safe... In a quest to find where they belong, what will Love and Malice have to lose to get there? Are they prepared to lose their identity for a place to call home? _______ Sorry if chapters XVII - XIX are confusing. A lot of secrets are starting to appear in the plot, and it might get a bit puzzling for you as the reader. Apologies in advance! ________ This book contains: - No swearing or rude words! - Little or no gore or gory content. - Most content suitable for under 13 year olds. - Small amounts of violence and threat (Chapter XXIII) - Use of weaponry This book should be suitable for younger children but please let us know if you disagree with this statement and why. UPDATE: Yes I am aware that at least half this book is really bad. I wrote it when I was quite young and very bad at writing. This is only my first draft of the book, and I am currently rewriting it to be at least 3x better. Please bear this in mind when reading and DON'T JUDGE ME, because I am a better writer now, and I am aware that this is a really bad book right now. Bear with, and maybe one day you will see here that there is a proper book. Also I welcome any tips for improvement :D
Todos los derechos reservados
#452
mum
WpChevronRight
Únete a la comunidad narrativa más grandeObtén recomendaciones personalizadas de historias, guarda tus favoritas en tu biblioteca, y comenta y vota para hacer crecer tu comunidad.
Illustration

Quizás también te guste

  • Shadows
  • I Can't Sleep (D.M. x OC)
  • THE UNWANTED DOCTOR
  • THE IMMORTALS (✓)
  • LIFE IS A CHOICE
  • Always. (A Draco Malfoy Story)
  • A Court of Ash and Necromancy
  • Shadow Wagner The Slayer - Do I Belong? (Book 1)
Shadows

"You know it won't go to the West," he said dropping his voice. "Maybe you're wrong. Who knows," she shrugged. Her shoulders had slumped but she had managed to not let any tears spill. "Baum knew what he was doing when he made the West wicked, Mary," he hissed. "The East was wicked in that book too, dumbass," Mary retorted. Jacob's hands went into fists to keep from pushing at his hair. The tree behind them began to shake slightly. The ground gave a tiny rumble. *************************************************** Mary's father recently passed. But she is finding out it might not have been from natural causes... Family adversaries threaten everything while influential other worldly authorities pull the strings. Mary will have to work with an unlikely ally from her childhood to navigate their new found powers and reclaim balance. Meanwhile... one dark soul is climbing the ladder of chaos. [][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][] This story has short passages from multiple POV. Hopefully you will find a point of view you prefer. Feel free to leave a message. I love comments! As the story progresses you might notice some subtle (and not so subtle) parallels to the Wizard of Oz. As I always advise my students- give it three chapters before setting it aside. Thanks for reading and enjoy! ☺️ This book is in a perpetual state of needing editing. I hope to return to the chapters to add some details. I'm hoping for a sequel as time allows. Oh, the life a middle school teacher... MORE TIME, I NEED MORE TIME. ‼️‼️Warning: Mild Language Please be advised.

Más detalles
WpActionLinkPautas de Contenido