Trapped
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MatureComplete Tue, May 18, 202143m
Who do I trust?
It's 7:31 pm on the 18th of February. In Hentsworth Mental Hospital, I am locking up the patients for the night. That is until I find a disfigured body and writing in blood scrawled on the floor.
As the building goes into lockdown with the murderer still trapped inside, the deceitful game of who to trust begins.
I do not know who to believe amongst those I thought were friends. I race against time to fulfil my job and survive the night.
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