The comanding// Jupiter Ascending
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Last published Wed, Feb 23, 2022
I haven't seen many Jupiter Ascending stories so I decided to write one, because the movie does not get the attention it deserves. This is a Reader x Caine story as well, I tried to add some parts of my own that were not in the movie to make it as different and orginal as I can.
With that being said *Disclaimer* I do not own any of the characters besides Saturn, and Brice I do not own the story line except for the ones I made and added myself
Saturn and Jupiter thought they were just 2 normal girls, living a some what normal but miserable life they longed for something more. Well let's just say their prayers were answered, their whole life changes in a matter of a few hours when 2 strangers walk into their life and introduce a whole new world they never knew they were part of. Is it anything good? Is it everything they dreamed of? Read and find out.
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