this is a story that I had to write for school and I would really like it if I could get you all feed feed back and tell me what I should add to the story or change
PS: I don't know what to call this story so pleas give me some ides
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This was requested by my friend Joely. Hope you and everyone else enjoys it! I know this is supposed to be a description, but I can't think of a good one. So you'll have to read it and find out!