Riptide vs Tsunami

Riptide vs Tsunami

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A follow up to the Glory vs Deathbringer story. :) It's a bit ... a bit ... I DON'T KNOW! IT JUST TURNED OUT LIKE THIS. I would love some feedback and suggestions. I feel like I move the story along too fast. There isn't really a chapter where they are just hanging out... Sorry if you think this is a bit short, but I'm focusing on Quality over Quantity. Maybe I can try work in some plotless chapters... None of the characters nor art are mine. Hope you enjoy!
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Hi! This is a draft sample of the first few chapters of the EXTREMELY long fanfiction i'm working on. I wrote these a while ago so my style has definitely improved and these are heavily unedited so it's going to be quite bad. I would appreciate feedback on any part. (My main problem is how punchable the oc is rn and I need help fixing lol) (It's also not mature I just have a few swear words in there)

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