The Commuter
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  • Reads 21,404
  • Votes 1,226
  • Parts 10
  • Time 1h 35m
Complete, First published Mar 22, 2021
Mature
Jungkook has been taking the 750 B train to work for years. It is part of his weekly routine with nothing out of the ordinary ever happening until one Friday morning when a handsome stranger boards the train. He is immediately attracted to this gorgeous stranger who has appeared on the 750 B train now for 5 weeks, but only on Fridays. This beautiful commuter creates a burn in him that he had not known possible. He is too bashful to act, but if his stranger makes a move he will respond.

Taehyung has been riding the 750 B train every Friday for 5 weeks. There is a beautiful commuter that has not only captivated him but stars in his dreams. His sexy stranger is shy and they have only exchanged fleeting glances. However, Taehyung sees something in his eyes that he recognizes. Lust. Today he will make his move and he will be bold. He has to, because this will be his last Friday on the 750 B train. He will ask his stranger to get off the train with him. He will tell him that he wants to make love to him and he believes that he wants the same.

What will Jungkook do? He is not irresponsible, yet he feels a heat and an attraction that he's never known before . This is the last time he will see his gorgeous stranger. He has 15 seconds to act. 
Get off the train with his hot stranger or never see him again. 

His choice will change both of their lives in ways neither could have ever imagined.
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"You shouldn't be out walking this late," Jeongguk called out, his tone mockingly casual. "Especially with that face." "People might confuse you with a slut. Then again..." Jeongguk smirked, his eyes gleaming. "Maybe you are one." Taehyung's blood boiled instantly, his vision turning red. Without a second thought, he spat, "Fuck you, Jeon." _____ In the wild streets of Seoul, Jeon Jeongguk is the reckless bastard everyone warns you about-doing illegal races, selling weapons, drugs, and probably his soul too. His motto? "Laws are just really good suggestions." Then there's Kim Taehyung. Rich as hell, but too stubborn to touch a penny of it. Instead, he's out here teaching kids like he's some kind of saint. Spoiler alert: he's not. When these two cross paths, it's instant hate. Taehyung thinks Jeongguk's a walking disaster, and Jeongguk thinks Taehyung's too pretty for his own good. But beneath the swearing and glares? Let's just say, things are about to get complicated in the messiest, most sarcastic way possible. Top Jeongguk Bottom Taehyung © jeonkimchi_ Do not plagiarise/copy the work