The Commuter
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  • Reads 20,661
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  • Parts 10
  • Time 1h 34m
Complete, First published Mar 22, 2021
Mature
Jungkook has been taking the 750 B train to work for years. It is part of his weekly routine with nothing out of the ordinary ever happening until one Friday morning when a handsome stranger boards the train. He is immediately attracted to this gorgeous stranger who has appeared on the 750 B train now for 5 weeks, but only on Fridays. This beautiful commuter creates a burn in him that he had not known possible. He is too bashful to act, but if his stranger makes a move he will respond.

Taehyung has been riding the 750 B train every Friday for 5 weeks. There is a beautiful commuter that has not only captivated him but stars in his dreams. His sexy stranger is shy and they have only exchanged fleeting glances. However, Taehyung sees something in his eyes that he recognizes. Lust. Today he will make his move and he will be bold. He has to, because this will be his last Friday on the 750 B train. He will ask his stranger to get off the train with him. He will tell him that he wants to make love to him and he believes that he wants the same.

What will Jungkook do? He is not irresponsible, yet he feels a heat and an attraction that he's never known before . This is the last time he will see his gorgeous stranger. He has 15 seconds to act. 
Get off the train with his hot stranger or never see him again. 

His choice will change both of their lives in ways neither could have ever imagined.
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