The Power Academy- Edited Sample
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Last published Thu, Mar 25, 2021
While I am still writing the Power Academy, I am also in the process of heavily editing the novel.
This book is a sample of some of the editing I have done to see if this is an improvement, or if I still need to continue editing these chapters. Constructive criticism is welcomed, and I hope you enjoy the extra details!
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