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This is a task from English. We had to write a paragraph about setting and the impact of phenomenological forces. I wasn't exactly proud of this paragraph but my teacher liked it so the two chapters of this are my version and his. 

I really wanted to show the drunkenly unnatural forces acting on the girl by showing the absence of social resistance or at least her unawareness of it. Hence, having her intoxicated was the way to go in my mind. There is an obvious motif was forms of water and birds which I tried to integrate (poorly) into the regular flow of words.

I've been thinking of taking the story further and playing with colour perception a little bed, especially cool tones being interrupted with red. So let me know if you like it and if I should develop or abandon it.

Hope you like it.
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Bill x Dipper x reader ni dumb4ss_okami_fan
33 parte Kumpleto
THIS IS MY FIRST FANFICTION, PLZ DONT CRITISIZE IT TO HARD ^-^ I try to leave most of your aesthetic traits to you however I do just say some of them. WARNING: in this story you are depressed and have social anxiety. it sucks in reality (ik from experience) but I have some ideas on how to use these to a romantic fan girl advantage. ;). in this story you don't have any powers (sorry) but you are really strong and independent. you also have a pair of twin katanas that you carry around with you everywhere. your parent shipped you away for the summer. a town is visible from the small plane window. surrounded by a forested area it seemed pretty secluded. it might not be such a crappy summer vacation after all. I was really glad when I managed to get my katanas trough airport security too. I might have some time to practice. the weird sensation of someone following you snapped you back to reality. when you saw that no on was behind you calmed down and went back to planning how to not make the summer suck but for the rest of the day, you knew, someone was definitely following you.
The Water Girl ni crystal110406
23 parte Kumpleto Mature
I'm the odd one out... the outsider... the water girl of the football team because I can't play any sports. Whenever I attempt to play sports, my two left feet hold me back. "Don't fucking touch me again, water girl. Now I'll have to scrub my arm until it bleeds to get your nastiness off." I'm not sure how I have been deemed the nasty girl in school, but it has been this way for a few years now. Thankfully, this is my last year at this school, then I am off to college, hopefully far away from here. I have sent in all my college applications and am just waiting for the right one to accept me. I look over at Marie when she says something else to me. Then my best friend pipes in, telling Marie to take her cheerleading ass on over to the jocks and get her pussy sucked and leave me alone. "God -Sydney, do you have to be so vulgar?" "Ah, River, don't start your good girl shit with me. One of us must show them assholes whose queen is around here, and it obviously will not be you."
Silver Umbrellas ni BookBird1497
40 parte Kumpleto
"We... We all thought you two were..." Cover your heads, grab your umbrella, and don't stay out after dark. The world isn't how we remember it to be. Follow along as our cast of characters is forced to navigate a deadly everyday maze of monsters, dehydration, and malice just to stay alive long enough to seize their only chance to go home. ----------------------------------- Hello~ This is a short story and an AU that could also function as future events after "Homeless." Rated PG-13 just in case, but it's not too intense to handle (at least, early on. Later, maybe it will get more intense). PLEASE NOTE THAT I SAID "COULD ALSO FUNCTION," NOT "SEQUEL TO HOMELESS." DON'T GET CONFUSED. Basically, this is an attempt at me being both poetic and angsty with my surroundings. I hope you enjoy it! There will probably be slower updates than I used to have, so please just bear with me. And I drew that cover, yo. I'm so freaking proud of it, you have no idea.
The Temple (Nanami Kento x Reader) ni ShriekingWizard
1 parte Kumpleto Mature
You've been feeling lost for a while, alone and unable to move on from your past. But one night at a bar with Nanami Kento changes all of that - if, of course, you're ready to accept the offering. *First time writer! Posting to AO3 and Wattpad under the same username.. I was inspired to write this because one night I was unbelievable horny for Nanami Kento and I read a fic (with good stats) so bad it made me want to throw up and smash my phone. This is me taking back my power. I have tried not to use gendered language (no outright references to 'you' being a woman, female, as such) so as many people as possible can enjoy this. If you'd like a version with a differently membered you character, please let me know! I'm trying to make as many people buck as possible. All constructive criticism welcome too. &lt;3*
Aiden ✔️ NOW PUBLISHED! ni HardinsGirl1
70 parte Kumpleto Mature
⚠️ Published version Available in Paperback & E-Book through Amazon! Hardcover and Paperback available online at Barnes & Noble! This WattPad version is a well-loved rough draft, enjoy it! But be warned it's the unedited, raw version of the book. ** Readers Choice Awards Winner 2020! "I'm going to prove why he doesn't matter, why no man matters but me." He says in a deep voice as his strong hands grab my waist. "I don't know why no one ever fucked you, but I'm glad they didn't. I get all of this to myself, do you know how happy that makes me? How fucking turned on I am by your innocence?" He says between quick breaths. I involuntarily let out a moan as his mouth trails my neckline. "Just say the words and I'll fuck you, Em." He says and I quickly nod. "No, say it. I need to know you want me, I need to know how much you need me inside of you." He says, his emerald eyes piercing straight through me. "I want you, Aiden," I say through ragged breaths, I want him so bad. --------------------- Emilia Banks is a good girl. She is full of excitement as she just ended the first half of her freshman year at college. Ready to spend time with her boyfriend and enjoy the summer. But when the unexpected happens and her life is flipped upside down her best friends brother, Aiden, who is visiting during the break is there to pick up the pieces. Which is not something he does for anyone, ever. **Mature Romance** **Mature Audience 18+** **Strong Language** **Sexual Content** © 2019 H.L. Swan
The Bad Girl That's Not Really Bad ni Everlark2000
32 parte Kumpleto Mature
"So you like cuddling with me?" she asks me "if I say yes can I cuddle you more?" I ask her "No" she says to me "Then no I don't like cuddling with you" I say to her picking up my hoodie and pants she wasn't wearing before throwing her over my shoulder. "Blue eyes put me down now" she says punching my back "Not happening" I say walking quietly down the hall to not wake anyone. "At least hold me where you can't see my underwear" she says to me "Thanks for the idea" I say to her looking quickly at the blue lacy underwear that matches my shirt on her "I like the blue matches my shirt" "Shut up" she grumbles ---------- "Fine your ass looks really fuck-able in these tight sweats" she taps my ass laughing ---------- "Let me down" she says to me "If you insist" I say to her slapping her ass once lightly before placing her on her feet ---------- Meet Daniel Matthews the nerd who is bullied, when he was younger his dad was never good to him, Daniel's dad does not want him happy. Daniel's neighbor Adrianna never talk but one day she needs a place to get away from her dad and they become friends, but only her friends know and he is still bullied. Meet Adrianna Robertson the bad girl is what people call her, when she was younger her mom left her the day she was born with her controlling father. Adrianna parties and gets drunk and smokes all the time. One day she just can't stand staying with her dad for any longer and goes to her neighbor Daniel's house till her friend picks her up. She went back completely wasted and needed a place to stay for the night since her dad was on her ass about getting drunk so she stays with him. I hope you like the book, there is going to a mild amount of swearing and lots of drinking and smoking. Everything is made up beside the state they live in. I have never drank or smoked before so if it's not correct I'm sorry in advance. I hope you like the book, please comment and vote. Everlark2000
SATELLITE EYES: THE WAITING SPOT ni Verserkerv
6 mga parte Kumpleto
Hi! As a newbie in writing, this is one of my first works. I'm never good in this field of art but this is my one and only outlet given the harsh circumstances. This was actually written from mid-June until early-July, 2015, and this was already long-gone completed before I enrolled in my 4th yr. CE courses. The narrative/essay is all about the sparkly encounters between two, light-year distant strangers. By the way, shout-out to that real/imaginary girl. I know this is insane, and I don't know if I'm wasting my time doing all of this, but all I want is just to express my utmost gratitude for such a memory she had incorporated within me. I also sincerely apologize for being such a creep. But she is the soul of this work. She's one in a million. I wish she would notice this, though that is very largely far from happening. I don't mind if she's already having someone, but I just really wanna thank her for all of this. It's more than a year that I had not seen her, but I don't know what is with this damn loyalty to her. Both of us never knew each other, but I feel so attached to her. My heart races upon the sight of her, but now, we lost those intersections. Probably because of different time schedules. It's been a year. And I'm missing her. I'm even planning a sequel for this one. And this is the only gift that I can give to her. But please don't take this piece seriously. The plot of this work is merely imaginary. Probably, while reading this, you may bring with you a calculator, a protractor, a UST map, and a Metro Manila map for easier understanding. Don't get lost. Don't worry, the pacing is slow enough.
My Guardian Angel ni musicfreakforever
37 parte Kumpleto
"You'll be safe now." My protector whispers into my ear. "My protector." I murmur, happy I was able to get something out. My protector chuckles. "Yeah, something like that." He says. Then footsteps go down porch steps and a car starts, then the car sounds fade away and I fall asleep. *** Ivy is a regular eighteen year old. Ivy isn't human and she is just figuring this out. Along with her new powers and other people who aren't human as well. Ivy is in for an adventure, because this new knowledge has changed her life forever. *** This is the first book to the trilogy Three Worlds, Two Keys, One Winner. *** Note to readers! I love all my readers, but if you hate mistakes / errors, please wait for me to complete my book and then read it. After I finish writing this story, I will thoroughly edit it. Thanks before hand! Love my readers! PS. I've written this is British English. Example, instead of color, I write colour. #294 in Fantasy
Schematic Beauty ni igrokyou
1 parte Kumpleto Mature
A first, crap, draft of a story I'm rewriting in a universe I made up when I was 18 and still love. I don't really intend to publish this - it's the base for what's probably going to be a film, if I can get the main characters to stop jabbering at each other. I haven't touched this draft for more than two years. You get to look at it and see what shit I don't send to the publishers. :) Featuring: infodumps! Run on sentences! Extended metaphors that don't make sense! Purple prose for the sake of purple prose!
Why me? [2p! Italy x Reader] ni cutechocolatelover
39 mga parte Kumpleto
[Rewrite done! Please read the original AND the rewritten story!] ~*~ You're definetly not social. You planned on staying at home, watching anime and probably eating some snacks, but since your best friend begged you to come with him to the prom, you couldn't say no. Someone asked you to dance with him - that was the last thing you remember thanks to your very good memory. After the prom, you woke up in a mansion, meeting someone very familiar... Disclaimer: I only own the plot
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Bill x Dipper x reader cover
The Water Girl cover
Silver Umbrellas cover
The Temple (Nanami Kento x Reader) cover
Aiden ✔️ NOW PUBLISHED! cover
The Bad Girl That's Not Really Bad cover
SATELLITE EYES: THE WAITING SPOT cover
My Guardian Angel cover
Schematic Beauty cover
Why me? [2p! Italy x Reader] cover

Bill x Dipper x reader

33 parte Kumpleto

THIS IS MY FIRST FANFICTION, PLZ DONT CRITISIZE IT TO HARD ^-^ I try to leave most of your aesthetic traits to you however I do just say some of them. WARNING: in this story you are depressed and have social anxiety. it sucks in reality (ik from experience) but I have some ideas on how to use these to a romantic fan girl advantage. ;). in this story you don't have any powers (sorry) but you are really strong and independent. you also have a pair of twin katanas that you carry around with you everywhere. your parent shipped you away for the summer. a town is visible from the small plane window. surrounded by a forested area it seemed pretty secluded. it might not be such a crappy summer vacation after all. I was really glad when I managed to get my katanas trough airport security too. I might have some time to practice. the weird sensation of someone following you snapped you back to reality. when you saw that no on was behind you calmed down and went back to planning how to not make the summer suck but for the rest of the day, you knew, someone was definitely following you.

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