Leveling Up! In the Backrooms...
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  • Reads 26,561
  • Votes 714
  • Parts 34
  • Time 4h 26m
Ongoing, First published Apr 09, 2021
Mature
So, backrooms? Am I right?  Yeah i know what your thinking. Leveling up? What?

Listen.... I absolutely love the backrooms, and I think that everything should be as it is, but what if, and here me out? There was someone who acquired the ability to become stronger, a leveling system, of sorts. 
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Our protagonist is Kai Senbon. A 19 year old guy who has been stuck in the backrooms for 3 years. After reaching level 999, after surviving level 998, he was judged by a powerful entity. After peering into his soul, he looked at all his sins and he was sentenced to live the rest of his life in agon- wait............what's this.........he has no sins.............
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Although this is my first ever story, I'm confident I can create something amazing, please give me feedback on where you think I should take this story.
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INTERNAL SIN {ORIGINAL BL STORY}

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My name is Kai and I lived in a world where guardian angels were assigned to an individual once they were 14, you are meant to only feel their presence and know they are with you and once you are 16, you are meant to meet your soulmate and your guardian angel's purpose will be done. However, I was 18 and in my senior year in highschool and never for once have I felt a presence, it was like I was forgotten and abandoned. I lived my life as the abnormal kid and pursue my dreams of getting into college but one day, that perception of my life changed when I walked into my room to find a glowing boy with wings on my bed, grinning at me. Was I supposed to see my angel?! What was the meaning of this? And instead of an innocent and delicate being, I was blessed with Chaos itself and like a switch, my once abnormal life took a dangerous turn and was flipped upside down, committing an Internal Sin. And what was all those flashbacks about, why was I getting memories of a life I've never lived? "You broke the wrong parts of me. You broke my wings and forgot I had claws. I should have plucked your feathers when I had the chance!" - Kai "A demon? Oh no, I am much, much worst," - Ralph "I'd kill them all if I fight back," - Cameron "I have no Master," - Rhys There is only one way to find out more. Click Read!