That one day
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Last published Mon, Apr 12, 2021
Some say "You will remember the Happiest day of your life" Some say "You will remember the saddest day of your life." But what if "The Day is the happiest and saddest at the same time?".
Kareem a man in his mid-30s had a glorious life with his family. A loving and Beautiful wife Aadila. Elder Son, Abdul-Rahman who was more into sport and an average studying student, and youngest son, Aadhil, who was more into Computers and a hard-working student and well joyful news of a new child. This was Enough for Kareem to live his life peacefully.
"Guess what?" Kareem asked seriously to his Sons, sitting in front of them while trying to keep his smile hidden.
"What?" They both asked like there was something really serious going on.
"You both are going to become elder brothers" Finally Kareem couldn't hide his smile and told them happily.
"What?!" Abdul Rahman said with a shocked face which slowly started turning into a smily one
"Huh?!" Aadhil said with a face that said 'Are you kidding me?' with a tune that clarified that he was not happy.
"OMG! I am gonna be an elder brother to another one!" Abdul Rahman suddenly started jumping with happiness. while Aadhil stood there with a pouting face "No! No! No! I do not want another sibling!" Aadhil suddenly said. This made everyone laugh.
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