Bar Red's Redemption (Edited)
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This is the edited version of Bar Red's Redemption with new content, it's been edited (to the best of my ability).
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I will be taking it down once I publish it, only this edited version not the original, except for the first ten chapters to let people know and experience which version they want (if they choose to buy it).
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