The Deal
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*Refurbished version of the original version written in late 2018*
When Miguel Saldivar "accidentally" sells his sister-Emily Saldivar-to one of the most fiercest gang leaders in America.
Dominico Flores. Feared by most, by most I mean Emily couldn't give a damn about him. She hates him for more than one reason. The main one? "Buying" her from her brother without her say in the matter.
What is Dominico going to do with this disobedient girl that's supposed to be his future wife? With secrets being uncovered and secrets being formed, how will Dominic help this crazy girl? And is Emily truly who she thought she was?
⚠️WARNING: THERE WILL BE MATURE LANGUAGE AND THEMES IN THIS STORY. I MEAN IT THIS TIME. THIS STORY WILL BE MUCH MORE MATURE THAN THE OG⚠️
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