WIP FANTASY STORY (LOOKING FOR FEEDBACK)

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Reads 6
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Parts 2
Time 13m

I have no title or description and I haven't done ANY EDITING!! But here's a story I've been writing for like two months(and am still writing)!!! Constructive criticism is welcome, hate is not.

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