Diagnosed Dancer
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Last published Mon, Feb 23, 2015
Amber, is fifteen, she attends a private dance academy called PTBA in New York City. Amber is the second highest ranked dancer in the nationwide company that she attends to.Tomorrow is the big day, March 18th 2012. Amber will be competing against the number one ranked dancer on the national ranking board. The night before, Amber was practicing her routine. In an instant she collapsed to the floor and turned a very pale color. She was rushed to the hospital. Little did Amber know, that could be the last time she danced.
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