Oh, Really? (Anime OC Exams)
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Last published Sun, Apr 26, 2015
Ever made an OC, and wondered just what the fuck you were thinking at the time? Ever wanted to know someone else's opinion on said OC's? Or, have you just wanted to look at what NOT to do when creating those imaginary beings? No? Well too fucking bad.
Here I will divulge you in my critical examinations of OC's, sent in by you fools of your own free will, in what could also be called 'The Mary Sue Elimination Process', or TMSEP for short.
Submissions are currently CLOSED. Keep in mind this is for any anime fandoms, but I may deny you on the terms that I simply haven't seen the show. A list of what I have seen is on my profile, don't be a lazy little shit and request anyways. Submissions through PM, not in the comments. Thanks.
[Character on the current cover is Kaori Miyazono from Shigatsu wa Kimi no Uso]
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