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Mentor [h.s]
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Ongoing, First published Apr 20, 2021
Mature
My family, we were born Amity. My father and mother were noble people, compassionate and warm. I had no true siblings - none I considered blood. But growing up there, being around those people... It never felt right.  

When I chose Dauntless, I was barely functioning. 

And when I met my Mentor, I don't think I was breathing.
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