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This is a raw unedited piece from my current novel I'm 1/4 way through I wanted it to be realistic so the lay out isn't great but here is the plot : "one smile or a wave from her and you were trapped, she had you wrapped around her finger" Amber Cadwell is th most addictive person you'll ever meet . She is gorgeous , glamourous and perfect until one day ... she disappears leaving five friends behind . A few weeks later two of the disappear in similar circumstances leaving only Brooke Maddie and Abby to find out what happened but will the twisted case of "the disappearance of Amber Cadwell" be to much for the girls to handle . One secret , six friends , one girl , too many lies to count , and three of them wind up dead ... or do they .
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