my life sucks...

There once was a happy girl named amber. She was so sweet, kind, and helpful. You know the things that don't exist anymore. Well, she is... Was. Yeah was because her family took her happiness away. Ok this is only my second book. But I will make it as interesting as possible and for my first book if you could read what I have and comment or inbox me some help with that story I would be very grateful. Please??? And if you said yes than thank you so much.