The Dragon Prophecy of Peace Bringers Prototype

This is for others to give me feedback so far. When the final product is done I am going to keep this one up for people to see how different the first draft is from the final product.

Ryan's life has been chaotic and he knew that there was nothing he could do except just live life. Everything changed when the Wildfire nation destroyed his home and he came across a temple hidden in a forest with an egg and a prophecy. Ryan now had to find the rest of the prophesied peace bringers and defeat the many evils of his world.

We rule the night and fight for what is good and right, Astromic Nation forever.