Original Character Review (OC Clinic)
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  • Parts 3
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FyerFyer17
Ongoing, First published Apr 26, 2021
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Welcome all writers! I will endeavor to provide a candid, detailed OC review. If you are amenable, I will also include your character and my corresponding commentary in subsequent chapters.
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