Uncontrollable Desires
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Last published Fri, Nov 21, 2014
Nirvana Bátor is a seventeen year old teenager who was forced to move away from home for all the wrong reasons. Her seemingly indestructible father is in a coma due to a severe car crash that left him the only survivor. Vana moves to the U.S. to live with her eccentric Aunt Silas . Holden, Cali is insolent and rural . In a strange new environmental Vana discovers family secrets and big secrets in general. Vana has to deal with her "urges", falling in love, and a huge jar of buttons all in one go.
A/N Okay I am an AMATEUR, a NOVICE, and I still will ask you to give the book a chance even though sounds pretty bad uninteresting since descriptions are NOT my forte at all.
P.S. I will only look at constructive criticism and positive feedback. Don't tell me "oh your book is f**king terrible" at least tell me why its so terrible. OK bye.
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