The Sound Of The Forest

Hay this is my first story :)
My first language isn't English and I'm young so please don't judge.
So let's get into the story:

KEEP IN MIND THOUSE PEOPLE DONT KNOW EACHOTHER

8 different people with different story's go on a vacation while school break in the same city on the same beach.
They are just casually enjoying life till a big wave hits them. When they get out the water there will be no one else there except them. They feel some kind of power go through their bodies. And when they open their eyes they see themselves in bed. Later that day they go camping and the same thing happen but this time the sun hits them. They hear a voice and meet up at the place where they find a secret invisible door to a magical world. ✨

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PLEASE TELL ME IF I HAVE A GRAMMAR MISTAKE BC I DONT WANT IT TO LOOK BAD. And tell me if you like it. BTW it's like 5AM while I'm writing this Description so I'll finnish it tomorrow.

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HOPE YOU ARE DOING GREAT I LOVE YOU SO MUCH <3