an unexpected turn of events

she's lost everything. there was no mercy from the world and no sympathy from the people. no sympathy from any living breathing being. It seemed as if the stars themselves were against the idea of her very existence. but somewhere, out in the streets, it seems as if someone,or something, has taken pity on her, be it for better or for worse...
this is the first time I attempt to write a story so please read it and give me feedback
thank you <3