Sunflower
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Last published Tue, May 4, 2021
Okay so basically I'm writing a book for fun and I don't really have anyone to proofread so I'm posting it here to hopefully get some constructive criticism and some tips on my grammar because it sucks so basically this story is about to sibling who has to learn how to live without their parents whose deaths they begin to investigate before it takes a turn
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