I have only finished the first chapter so far and would be grateful for any comments. This is a work in progress and will not be finished for some time
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Hey first this isn't a book this I a short story
So the chapters aren't long it was just something I decided to put together as I wrote my book but leave me feedback let me know what you think and enjoy!
WARNING:(Their maybe mistakes!)