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When The Crown Falls

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darkness descent fantasy heartbreak melencholy royalty sadness

Hey! I'm a new author and I'm here looking for critiques and constructive criticism! 

This story is about a girl whose born into royalty but things don't always work out how she wishes they would.

If you read this story, thank you! It means a lot to me! :)All Rights Reserved

darkness descent fantasy heartbreak melencholy royalty sadness

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