The abondoned promiss
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Last published Tue, Mar 15, 2022
Actually iam a virakhi fan...but I didn't liked the way makers changed the character of pakhi(from a independent and matured girl to an obsessed lover)...So ...this story will be a treat to a #onlypakhifans who desperately wanted to see her in old avataar...
This story features a old and bindass girl pakhi who lived her life to the fullest and have many responsibilities in life and have soo many people who loves her...
Here you can see that pakhi have realised that virat doesn't love her anymore and accepted the truth...there will be a story of a pakhi(forensic officer),virat (police officer),samrat(army officer) and sai(upcoming doctor)..
Here,we will see the independent pakhi and the story of #samrakhi......
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