Melody within you

Shaneol is a former stripper who wants to turn her life around. Things take a drastic toll when she decides to embark on a journey to New Jersey.
But who will she meet on arrival?

I request you all to read atleast 3-4 chapters of my story to reach a conclusion.
This is my first story and I request you to give it a chance.
Feel free to correct me anywhere if you find any mistakes.