My unbeatable Warrior
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Om nama shivay....a girl in her early 20s praying to the Lord shiva clearly nothing in her mind.
But when she open her eyes with sound of mahabharat music on TV she only thinks about karna's pain she have no idea why she can't see him in pain why every time she feels the pain of him... she asks to her favorite God whats happening with me and suddenly she had a weird wish if I get a chance I want to become his shoulder to lean on I want to become his strength and the world want to see him as a true warrior not tragedy hero not with a pity but with a proud... pls mahadeva give me a one chance....
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Radheya-Priya Vrushali Padmavati: Soul-mate of a Surya Putra (Karna Series 2)
This is the untold story of a wife of one of the most promising and remarkable archer of Mahabharata. Karna. This girl loved him unconditionally from the very bottom of her heart and was witness of his endless pain, suffering, dilemma and agony to prove himself. She was a very simple maid who became a queen by her own merit. She loved a man whose own heart was already broken by death of his lover and she warmed his heart. She saw his pain, she had supported him, she had suffered for him, but she felt ignored by the coming of two other wives of him. However she loved them both as her own baby sisters and both of them also respected her with their whole heart. She suffered tremendously by his avoidance and then falling one after another for two other beautiful wives. But she did not try to complain. She helped him. She suffered by loosing her nine sons one after another and then by her husband Karna and her two baby sisters Supriya and Uruvi. What if she was an immortal being as the Manas Kanya of Brahma Dev?!! How could she cope up with the pain and endless agony of loosing her children one after another?!! From her only son Vrishasen to Supriya Putra her dearest Vrishaketu and Uruvi Kanya her beloved Padmaja?!! She is daughter of Brahma Dev in two previous births. So She is Brahma Dev Manas Putri too like Devi Supriya and Devi Ganga. She is known as Brahma Putri Vrushali in her previous birth as the wife of estranged Gandarv Prince Biswa Bhanu (previous life of Karna). It is my purely fan fiction story based on the epic Mahabharata. I don't want to hurt anyone's religious sentiments or believes. Even I don't want to change the course of entire Mahabharata. I follow the Bengali version of Mahabharata by Kashiram Das. The pictures were taken from the public domains. Images courtesy: Pinterest, Google Chrome and YouTube.Concluida
NITYA - THE ETERNAL ONE
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𝘈𝘯𝘢𝘯𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘮 - 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘮𝘪𝘴𝘵 𝘰𝘧 𝘭𝘰𝘷𝘦
We all carry something. Pain. Shame. Memories that feel heavier than our own bones. That quiet kind of suffering that never really leaves-even when we smile. For Ananyata Kanitkar a 16-year-old girl and an invisible presence in her own world, life has become a blur of numb mornings and anxious nights. Once full of faith in Narayana, the cosmic protector... now, she feels nothing. Just silence. Just questions. "Does He exist?" "Does He listen?" "Why me?" She's the quiet girl in the corner of the classroom, the one who doesn't speak anymore, because no one ever truly heard her in the first place. But in the vast silence of the universe, someone has heard her. And when hearts call with such despair, the Jagatpalaka listens. When the divine descends not in thunder-but in mist. When love finds you not in joy-but in ruin. What happens when the Infinite decides to touch a finite life ? Cover by @OurFictionNest
Aanyati - A Warrior
She was an open book but the world was illiterate. A divine soul she was, daughter of Agni dev and mata prakriti, she was the jewel of Panchal, Drupad's heart, a never ending ray of hope she was but destiny had other plans. She became the prey of every misery vested on her family from Drupad's heart she became Yudhisthir's dharma, from Panchal's jewel she became Indrprast's queen and at the end, a woman known for her strength..... They say follow dharma but what is dharma? If the intentions behind a lie is rightful, does it make the lie dharma? Why was I choosen? They completed each other in every way. He was stick to his Dharma and she to her Karma. He never lied and she made sure no such situations come when he have to lie. He was calm like ocean and she was furious like fire. He listened and she spoke. Note:- this story is just a fan fiction. It has nothing to do with the great epic. I have taken its plots with changes. This story is not meant to hurt someone's feelings. I may include new couples . If you don't like such ideas then please leave....
Journey to the Old Era (Drisana's Mahabharat #1)
Drisana has always felt like she's in the wrong place, wrong time. Why? That has no answer. After her parents death, adventure lover Drisana has been travelling around the world to find peace in her heart which has always been missing. But things take a drastic change when she comes to visit the place that her parents belonged to, where she was born. One moment she was in the basement of her parental house and the next she somehow tumble through a energy portal to 5157 years back in time in the Dwapar yug, badly injured, right on the hands of the legendary heroes of Mahabharat, Pandavs. What is she doing there? How she reached from Kaliyug to Dwapar yug and why? Many more things are running through her mind and all she got from the mortal disguise of Lord Narayan, Krishna is, "Tum etihas ka hissa nahi balki etihas rachne aayi ho. Apni vaggya ka racaita tum khud ho. " (You're not part of the history. Rather you have come to create the history. You're the writer of your own destiny.) *********** Familiar with the Mahabharat? Don't worry if you're not. I've added a short description of the original Mahabharat plot in the book for those. This story will follow the original mahabharat storyline but in a vastly different way with a lot of twists and events in my style. 😉 I'm aware Mahabharat holds religious sentiments for some and I do not INTEND to offend anyone. This is for entertainment purpose only. So don't get serious or offended please. And I apologise in advance if you feel hurt by any content of the book.Concluida
Our Curse ✅
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A Broken Queen
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Another Chance for Lives
Karna and Draupadi. A story for many who wanted another chance for Karna and Draupadi. What if the Gods decides to give them another chance? What will happen if there was just a little bit of difference in time. Another chance for people to make right decision. They say your whole life splashes in front of your eyes just before you die. But the chances you didn't take, a chance that could alter your whole life, that chance will run after you even in your death. Question you why you didn't take them. The plot of the story starts for when the Trilok, Bramha, Vishnu, Maheshwar and all the Gods and Goddesses sees what the future holds for the Kuru dynasty and the people of Hastinapur. In the future, Mahabhart war ends and many suffers because of a family. The citizens who lost their lives, the widows, the orphans and Draupadi's mourning. The gods have decided to give them a chance but Surya Dev couldn't watch his son Karna suffers more so he comes to ask him if he also wants to be a not part of it. So with the boon he got from Bramha for all his penance, Surya Dev talks to Karna's soul after he dies in the war. He shows Karna a vision of what will happen and ask him if he actually wants to be a part of it. For once he goes back, he will wake up many years before he dies and won't know what will happen or rember this is another chance, and many events already happened. But his heart thats been wounded multiple times aches for Draupadi and he decides to come anyway, determined to change his life along with hers. He will wake up after a year of Lacsha garh but his soul will be much older. Purely fictional.Concluida
Timeless Ties
--- Y/N finds herself trapped in a world long forgotten, where the past is ruled by kings and warriors, and her presence is a mystery. Karna, a formidable warrior with an unyielding sense of duty, sees her as a threat-but neither of them can deny the pull of fate that binds them. As suspicions rise and secrets are kept, their lives become entangled in a web of destiny and deceit. Caught between a past she can't reveal and a man she can't trust, Y/N must navigate a world where enemies can become lovers, and the truth is more dangerous than lies. ---
There are two primary choices in life : to accept conditions as they exist or accept responsibility for changing them - Devakinandana Vāsudeva Krishna. "You know what is right and what is wrong, husband," She said softly, looking into his dark eyes filled with emotional turmoil, "But be assured that you would have take responsibility for your actions." Radheya glanced at the child, Arjuna's son, sprawled on the ground bleeding from various places. His beloved wife's words, spoken when he broke down in front of her after he found out his birth truth, played ceaselessly in his mind. Her voice had been firm and unyielding that day. She had given him the strength he had needed to make the decision to stay with Duryodhana till the end. But...this? He gulped, wondering if he could watch his nephew's death, so near to his eyes. Should he interfere? But hasn't this boy killed his beloved Laxmana? 'What actions you take, remember you would be liable for it,' Radheya thought, a frustrated sigh escaping his lips. Closing his eyes, he made a decision. He just hoped his darling wife would support him in this, otherwise, he had no idea how he would deal with the mess he was about to create. ?️#6 in Kunti ?️#5 in Bhishma
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