I See
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Ongoing8m
Last published Thu, Jan 22, 2015
I scream, I thrash, but it doesn't matter. I sob, I cry, but it doesn't care. It laughs. It mocks. It is amused. It's here. It's there. Everyone has one. They are called Mongins. The little voices inside your head. Your 'conscious', but worse. Some are good, some are bad. In this case. Bad. 'It' makes my decisions. 'It' chooses my words, my food, my clothes, my family! This naughty Mongin is getting the best of me! I scream, I thrash, but it doesn't matter, it doesn't care.
Meet 5 year old, Eeny. What happens after she wakes from a terrible coma, only to find that something else now controls her body. She looses all her friends, her family, because they think it's her. But it's not, it's her Mongin! The thing controls her. But she wants her life back. How far will Eeny go to be Eeny again? Read to find out!
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