A Shy Girl's Letter

This is different from all my writing. It's not fiction and there's no choppy plot-I'm trying to fix that in my writing by the way. I only put this under Teen Fiction because I changed the boy's name to protect hos idenity and whatnot. This is a letter I wrote and rubbed a perfume sample on for a guy I have a huge crush on. I'll probably put it in his locker once I find out where his locker is. Here is a piece of my life. Tell me if you want me to try adding on and how.