The Undetectable
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Ongoing, First published Nov 20, 2014
Katerina Salvatore is a troubled young woman who craves adventure and freedom. Unfortunately, she's being trailed by the government of her dystopian world because of a gift she was born with. If the government discovers her secret, the people she is close to will surely go down with her. She cares too much about her best friend to endanger her any longer. Katerina risks one last quest with her best friend where she meets a mysterious young man who turns her world upside down. Katerina fears she will not be able to escape the grasp of her damaged society...or her ex-boyfriend. What happens next will change her life and the lives of countless others indefinitely.

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I am writing this book for my high school senior project. I appreciate any and all comments on how I can edit it grammar wise and plot wise. I hope you enjoy reading it! I'll update whenever I complete a new chapter, which should be about once a week.
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