Surrender -Under Re-Write
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2nd book to "You Make it Possible"
My eyes quickly scan the yard hoping to meet eyes with who I know for a fact is my mate. I could feel my wolf inside me going insane as I looked around. They finally stopped and settled at the other side of the yard.
My breath hitches in my throat at the sight when a familiar pair of electric blue eyes meet mine.
The boy smiles, but it falls almost instantly. We both had the same realization.
Danny was my mate. My sisters ex-boyfriend, who she thought was her mate, was actually mine.
"Oh for fucks sake"
October 2021 - September 2022
***UNDER RE-WRITE***
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"My walls melt in your gaze, your sunshine clears the haze. Surrender."
Title inspired by "Into the Sunset" by Dance Gavin Dance, Bilmuri
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