Won't Get Any Better Than This

Allynn's is the name, puns is my game. This story is about a group of teens who go on a journey not only about learning who they are but also going on a life threatening adventure. Hopefully know one gets left behind in the forest of fays or should I say leaf behind......ok tough audience. Well I'm going to let bean try and tell the story.
Well um we start out where a creepy old dude keeps staring at us in our village and we just think its cuz we were all wearing skirts but it was actually Peanuts uncle who was looking for them to give them a way to fix their problems so we went on a trip and yodda yodda yodda we got the thing we were all happy. Just read the story I'm bad at summarizing
ALLYNN: he is short about 5'3", has brownish grey hair that is curly cut in a little Afro like shape but it's really just grown out from them shaving their head. He is a little pudgy but still are pretty slim.
LAWRENCE: he is a stick but is about 5'10". He doesn't look to strong but has the most muscle out of everyone. He has dark brown almost black hair that has bangs that fall into a point.
PEANUT: they are the same height as Lawrence but have more weight on them. They love to dress in Flowy clothes. She has strawberry blonde hair cut into a shag mullet.
BEAN: they are 5'6" with a hourglass figure. They don't like to flaunt it so they wear baggy clothes. They have jet black hair that is above their shoulders and is heavily layered.
PERRI: she has the longest hair which falls down to her lower back and she has home cut bangs with lots of face framing. It is naturally blonde but looks almost white but she likes to dye it different colors. She is the same height as Bean.

The point of view of each chapter will switch between the characters and backgrounds will get added in for each character as the story progresses. This is my first story so let me know what you guys think!