Choosing A Commander

Choosing A Commander

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Kyla is a pilot for the Resistance after her parents were murdered by the First Order. She flies under the call sign Black-Nine with the Black Squadron in her custom green T-70 X-wing with her green and silver droid BB-7. Poe Dameron is a Commander for the Resistance and leader of Black Squadron and goes by the call sign Black Leader. Poe's affection for Kyla has been well hidden for the seven months he has known her. Kylo Ren is the Commander of the First Order after becoming Supreme Leader Snoke's apprentice. He leads the Knights of Ren in causing mass destruction throughout the galaxy. During a routine sector sweep, Kyla engages Kylo in battle. She's in her X-wing and he's in his TIE-Silencer. When they shoot each other out of the sky, they end up stranded on a deserted planet together. Can they put their hatred for each other aside and work together to get off the planet? Who will rescue them? Which one becomes a prisoner once a savior arrives? Will Commander Dameron save his little pilot from Commander Ren? Or will Commander Ren succeed in stealing the little rebel from Commander Dameron?
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Based on Star Wars ep. VII: The Force Awakens. "You... you're afraid." I say looking back at him defyingly. "That you'll never be as strong as Darth Vader." I say his hand moving away from me instantly and he takes a step back finally my body gets released from his hold. I notice the expression from his face breaking completely, he is confused even rattled. I breathe heavily and keep staring back at him proud of myself as he picks up his mask and exits the room leaving me tied up to the interrogation chair. How was I able to do all of that? ------ This book is part 1 of my rewrite series. I figured that if If I wanted to rewrite TLJ and TROS the only correct way would be by also doing TFA so here is that. Also, this book is going to be very similar to the movie to a point where it is almost identical but since it's written with different points of views we get to know more about the characters and where they come from. It is very canon compliant especially when talking about the different character backstories. That being said, this doesn't mean that the next two books are going to be the exact same as the movies I want to take the other books in a completely different way. They might still have similarities to the movies but not that many. ------ **I do not own any of the characters in the Star Wars Saga all credits to that go to Lucas Films.**

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