Ascension of the Disqualified Mage

With nothing other than a bleak outlook for his future prospects, Tom will attempt to do what is impossible and shake off his mark of being a failure. In doing so Tom will grow to understand himself and the world around him, a world where every single part of one's life can be found in a person's [status] and where the gods above play fast and loose with the lives of the mortals beneath them.

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