Paradise [Draft 1]

Paradise [Draft 1]

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Fantasy
I've not really got a good idea of where this one is going to go! I've a lot of ideas, but they can't all go in! Anyway, it will be a magical realism kind of thing.
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A first, crap, draft of a story I'm rewriting in a universe I made up when I was 18 and still love. I don't really intend to publish this - it's the base for what's probably going to be a film, if I can get the main characters to stop jabbering at each other. I haven't touched this draft for more than two years. You get to look at it and see what shit I don't send to the publishers. :) Featuring: infodumps! Run on sentences! Extended metaphors that don't make sense! Purple prose for the sake of purple prose!

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